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Sherlock远星查看:97 回复:3 评论:46 创建时间:2023-06-24T07:23:20

https://shequ.codemao.cn/wiki/novel/cover/184085

This is quite a good novel since I can read it 喵oothly without a translator. But there is still something to improve. For exanple, you can use some oral expressions to make your novel more lively, and read every chapter after writing it down by yourself so that you can see if there is something that readers can't read 喵oothly. In short, it's a very nice novel among all the English ones in codemao.

Plus, forgive my poor English, I am just a ninth-grader.

um, I'm only Eleven and I read them after writing and also sent them to my godmother for her to correct some grammar mistakes for me (she is American ).

Want to be friends?

Good idea ;)

wait a second, godmother? I thought she would only appear in story books.

no, I have a real godmother

oh, I forgot to ask you ,what is your English name ? I'm Alice.

and I have her WeChat

I'm Anthony, you can call me Tony for short.

ok ,I'll talk to you later, Tony ~

Hi Tony, I made a chat room just for us . https://shequ.codemao.cn/community/546559

I'm sorry for being absent, I was going on a trip to Beijing and I was on the train all day. there were no signals so my computer couldn't connect with the Internet.

Now I have arrived. It's very kind of you to set up a chatting room for us.

That's great,what are you doing in Beijing?

I went to the Universal Studio once.

you have started your summer holiday then ?

I visited the Palace Museum today, it was massive.

Yes, since June 22nd.

Wow , 🤩 I never got in there.

But I did go to the Palace Museum in Shenyang.

I went there yesterday and took part in around 5 projects. I shoud have asked you for some advice.

I liked the Deception Rollercoaster best(霸天虎过山车)

Wow, that one looks crazy, I didn't try it, my heart can't suffer such a high G force. You must be very brave.

How about 飞跃侏罗纪?

I loved all the rollercoasters, and I love that kind of stimulation

It almost killed me :(

That's a bit of an overstatement

I liked that one too, although a number of people beside me screamed.

WhataboutHarryPotterandtheforbiddenjourney(禁、忌、之、旅)

？？？why is all the spaces gone ?

My advice is that you should get in as early as you can ,around 7:30 in the morning .

Which hotel did you stay at?

It's a bug of shequ.codemao.cn, but never mind, I can get your point. There were too many people and the quene was really long, I had to wait 3 hours if I wanted to play it, so I didn't.

仁和轩，the hotel doesn't have an English name.

That's your loss, you should've got there first thing in the morning

It was so fun ,I played it several times

I see. I may go there 3 years later and try that one.