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我写了一个小说,大大们能来看看嘛?

用户:Sherlock远星Sherlock远星查看:46 回复:3 评论:46 创建时间:2023-06-24T07:23:20


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Planet_CubePlanet_Cube

This is quite a good novel since I can read it 喵oothly without a translator. But there is still something to improve. For exanple, you can use some oral expressions to make your novel more lively, and read every chapter after writing it down by yourself so that you can see if there is something that readers can't read 喵oothly. In short, it's a very nice novel among all the English ones in codemao.

Plus, forgive my poor English, I am just a ninth-grader.

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SummerTimeSummerTime

看过了,至少能看懂一点

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Sherlock远星Sherlock远星

主人公 :Snowball, Tibbles 的前喵

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Tibbles:作者的闺蜜

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Wendell: Tibbles的喵

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很遗憾,Tibbles的喵已经死了呜呜呜😢

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