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我都烦自己了，但是还是忍不住说一句，最近发生的事实在是让我不能不说，
对不住了，那些说我矫情的人，我必须说几句：
小说更新了。
伦敦西区肯辛顿富人区名富商大天才煊I believe that you'll be very very surprised to see this chapter in the novel.It's true that it's written in English.You're not blind,or crazy or something else.It's just a chapter which is in English.
So we're goin' to talk about the main idea of this chapter (an important information).And the information is:From now on,this novel will be written in English.
Ah you must want to ask "Why do you do this?" or "Are you going to show off how great/poor your English is?It's so shallow!"
Oh no no no don' think so.Trying,practicing and improving my English are the reasons of why I do this.Before this I've read Harry Potter and the Prisoner of Azkaban and two books above it.I just suddenly fell in love with writing stories,fictions and articles in English.And that's enough for me.I don't care who else have the feeling of wanting to read my novel whether it is changed to English or not.
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ftxqgfudi墙裂建议：
编程猫的小说区增添英语单词纠错功能。
对于那里：
这位童鞋很细心，发现了这个小彩蛋。
其实这是英文小说常用缩写，比如don't 缩写成don'，can't缩写成can'
不仅如此，有些地方为了表现口音问题，会将词语做一些处理。
例如：yer' 和 ter，你能看懂吗？
其实是you和to的口语变形（其实Scot都这么说噻）。
另外，一些词语在中式教材中极少见到，例如：Dunno，这个词其实是(I)don't/didn't know的缩写形式，不信你去查度娘er。不加主语，多用在直接引语之中。
还是再次感谢能把我的蹩脚英语从头看到尾！
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ftxqgfudi喵
另：最新一章发出来了，力争翻译成汉语之后字数突破1000。
英语好难写啊，每个句子都要打磨好久，最后还是非常蹩脚。
完全不是平时的水平，恐怕只有三分之一（这句话有彩蛋）。
感觉写得好累。
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Ryan袁奥
我相信你会非常惊讶地看到小说中的这一章。它确实是用英文写的。你不是瞎子，也不是疯子或别的东西。它只是一个英文章节。
所以我们要谈谈本章的主要思想（一个重要的信息）。信息是：从现在开始，这部小说将用英文写成。
啊，你一定要问“你为什么这样做？” 或者“你要炫耀你的英语是多么好/差？它太浅了！”
哦，不，不，不，不要这样。为了我这么做，我不得不去练习和提高我的英语。在此之前我读过哈利波特和阿兹卡班的囚徒以及上面的两本书。我突然陷入了困境。喜欢用英语写故事，小说和文章。这对我来说已经足够了。我不在乎还有什么想要阅读我的小说的感觉是否改为英语。
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伦敦西区肯辛顿富人区名富商大天才煊Both Will and Daniel's heart beat once in a heavy style.What else could they do?No matter how many force-field shields,they still couldn't defence the ME-submachine-gun;s attack.It was just like the fiery charcoal(an ancient source of energy,and was popular one thousand and seven hundreds years ago) touched a board of ice,burning,melting and then going through it.
What were they do?Why did they do these?Why hadn't they been burnt yet?
Will's heart was filled with dispair and unwilling.He was just a little,not eye-catching warrior and was just got a major general,but now he would die.
But things did not go as what he thought,footsteps,noisy scream and shout came from the door.The light beams,came out from the ME-gun,were also became messy,too.He suddenly thought something.
"Hey!Daniel!Yeah I'm callin' you."He shouted to Daniel,who was shocked by these sudden changes.
"C'mon! Come here!We've been saved!"
Daniel was still squatting there,with full of doubt.Will had to pull him to another safer place.
"What's things going on?"
But Will didn't have time to explain all these things to him.He stood up and look through the door.There were only four men still there,and two of them were shooting something towards outdoor.That was means……He thought.That was means they only need to fight with two men!
Now Daniel was totally reaction.He pull out his own ME-gun and then shot to two men.
Will saw it clearly that a light beam came out from the ME-submachine-gun was hitting on one of these four person and his chest had been burnt in several hundred milliseconds,then he fell down,half of his body had become carbon,dark and crispy.
Things happend after that weren't so interesting.The other three guys all had been shot in two minutes.After this event Daniel recalled:"I killed one of them personally!"
Will ran towards the door.A voice came into the room.
"Freeze!Don't move unless you——"
"It's me!It's——"
Will yelled,but a warrior came in,holding up a foot-long stick.He pressed a button on it.Then a strand of blue light just like lightning swepted the room.Will had to move away the door.
The blue light was sweeping again.Daniel raised the force-field shield up,trying to defence the light.Will saw it,and was in a state of extreme panic.
"No!Stop it!Stop you 喵!"He suddenly pounced to the shield in haste.He was between the light and the shield.Daniel was scared,watched him hitting by the light.
Will yelled hysterically.He was shouting,roaring very painfully.He shut his eyes tightly,as though he was tortured.
Less than ten seconds,he finally stopped shouting.In fact he fainted.
The room came silence for a few seconds,then Daniel's voice rang out,in a very cross style.
"How dare you!How dare you shoot to him!"Daniel roared to him angrily."Look clearly and recognize who I am!"
The young soldier seemed to be dull of things he done.
"I…I though he's the enemy."
"Look at it.Right.Now,tell me young man.What is his military rank?"
"He……He……"
the young soldier was silent.
Daniel gazed at him in a few seconds.Then——to his surprise——he laughed.
"Oh c'mon!These years you can hardly be killed even you beat a major general!"
The next day,Will woke up in the military hospital.
"So scared,isn't it?The elec-shot whip?"
"Yeah,it's very hurt."
Daniel and Will was talking.
"And next time don't be such a silly man as though you only have less than one month's experience.Never try to defence the elec-shot whip by the force-field shield,remember?It had blown five hundred people in the war Ⅲ of the M11 planet."
"Okey okey I know.So we all recieve that the man behind this event is Hill?Damn it,I should know it earlier."
They talked for a long time.Finally Will asked the question again.
"Now could I take half a month off?"
"Of course you can."Daniel said in a funny tone.
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Ryan袁奥
威尔和丹尼尔的心脏都以沉重的风格击败了他们。他们还能做什么呢？无论有多少力场盾牌，他们仍然无法防御ME冲锋喵的攻击。它就像火热的木炭（一种古老的能量来源，并在一千七百年前流行）触及一块冰块，燃烧，融化然后经过它。
他们做了什么？为什么他们这样做？为什么他们没有被烧毁呢？
威尔的心里充满了绝望和不情愿。他只是一个小小的，不是引人注目的战士而且只是一个大将军，但现在他会喵。
但事情并没有像他想象的那样，脚步声，嘈杂的尖叫和喊声从门口传来。从我喵出来的光束也变得一团糟。他突然想到了什么。
“嘿！丹尼尔！是的，我正打电话给你。”他向丹尼尔喊道，丹尼尔对这些突如其来的变化感到震惊。
“来吧！过来！我们得救了！”
丹尼尔仍然蹲在那里，充满怀疑。他不得不把他拉到另一个更安全的地方。
“发生了什么事？”
但威尔没有时间向他解释所有这些事情。他站起来，透过门看。那里只剩下四个人，其中两个人向室外射击。这意味着......他想。这意味着他们只需要与两个男人战斗！
现在丹尼尔完全反应了。他拿出自己的我喵，然后向两名男子喵。
会清楚地看到我-冲锋喵发出的光束撞击了这四个人中的一个，他的喵在几百毫秒内被烧毁，然后他摔倒了，他的身体的一半变成了碳，黑暗而脆。
之后发生的事情并不那么有趣。其他三个人都在两分钟内被喵杀。在此事件发生后，丹尼尔回忆说：“我亲喵喵了其中一人！”
威尔跑向门口。一个声音传进了房间。
“冻结！除非你 - 否则不要移动 - ”
“这是我！它 - ”
威尔喊道，但是一个战士进来，拿着一根长长的棍子。他按下了一个按钮。然后一缕蓝光就像闪电一样扫过房间。必须离开门。
蓝色的灯光再次扫过。丹尼尔抬起了力场盾，试图防御光线。它会看到它，并处于极度恐慌的状态。
“不！停下来！停止你这个喵！”他突然猛地扑向盾牌。他在光明和盾牌之间。丹尼尔吓坏了，看着他被光线击中。
他会歇斯底里地大叫。他大喊大叫，非常痛苦地咆哮。他紧紧地闭上眼睛，仿佛受到了折磨。
不到十秒钟，他终于停止了喊叫。其实他昏了过去。
房间沉默了几秒钟，然后丹尼尔的声音以非常交叉的方式响起。
“你怎么敢！你怎么敢向他喵！”丹尼尔生气地咆哮着说道。“看得清楚，认出我是谁！”
这位年轻的士兵似乎对他所做的事情感到乏味。
“我......我虽然他是敌人。”
“看看吧。现在，告诉我年轻人。他的军衔是什么？”
“呵呵……”
那个年轻的士兵沉默了。
丹尼尔在几秒钟内凝视着他。然后 - 令他惊讶的是 - 他笑了。
“哦，来吧！这些年来，即使你击败了一位将军，你也很难被杀喵！”
第二天，威尔在军队医院醒来。
“太害怕了，不是吗？电子喵鞭子？”
“是的，它非常受伤。”
丹尼尔和威尔在说话。
“下次不要这么傻，好像你只有不到一个月的经验。不要试图通过力场盾来防御电子喵鞭，记得吗？它在战争中炸了五百人m 11星球的Ⅲ。“
“我知道的好的，好的。所以我们都接受了这个事件背后的男人是希尔？喵，我应该早点知道。”
他们谈了很长时间。最后，威尔将再次提出这个问题。
“我现在可以休半个月吗？”
“当然可以。”丹尼尔用一种有趣的语气说道。
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